Talk:Underwater camouflage/Archive 1
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Assessment comments[edit]
Start class - good referencing, a good start, though just provides a list of examples at this stage. Richard001 (talk) 12:08, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
Categories[edit]
There needs to be a category relating to the 'underwater' element. I don't see any obvious one though. Richard001 (talk) 12:19, 17 June 2010 (UTC)
Mimicry template[edit]
I'm also not sure how best to fit this into the mimicry template. I hadn't even thought of articles broken down by the environment the mimicry occurs in. I can't think of much potential to add more articles of this type though, so it probably shouldn't have its own line. But then where should it be placed? It doesn't fit easily with the other groups. Richard001 (talk)
Page breaks[edit]
It's not normal to use page breaks like this, creating big gaps of whitespace. Either there could be less pictures or some could be in a gallery below, since there are too many for the text to fit alongside them normally. Richard001 (talk) 12:09, 5 September 2010 (UTC)
