This article is within the scope of WikiProject China, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of China related articles on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.ChinaWikipedia:WikiProject ChinaTemplate:WikiProject ChinaChina-related articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Biography, a collaborative effort to create, develop and organize Wikipedia's articles about people. All interested editors are invited to join the project and contribute to the discussion. For instructions on how to use this banner, please refer to the documentation.BiographyWikipedia:WikiProject BiographyTemplate:WikiProject Biographybiography articles
This article is within the scope of WikiProject Christianity, a collaborative effort to improve the coverage of Christianity on Wikipedia. If you would like to participate, please visit the project page, where you can join the discussion and see a list of open tasks.ChristianityWikipedia:WikiProject ChristianityTemplate:WikiProject ChristianityChristianity articles
Overall: Both article need end-of-sentence cites for the fact of him discovering the city. The source confirms the claim ("He discovered the Shang deposits at Daxinzhuang"). The source is a doctoral dissertation, but it seems to have a decent number of citations according to Scholar, so I think it's fine to use. Earwig's clear for both articles and no other issues I can see, so gtg once the end-of-sentence cites are added. AryKun (talk) 13:28, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@AryKun: Oops! Added end of sentence cites. Thank you! Generalissima (talk) (it/she) 13:49, 14 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
The following discussion is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
@Generalissima After reading the article, here are my comments! I can definitely say he's a certified loverboy to his wife Dora 💙. Arconning (talk) 15:07, 18 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
@Generalissima Just decided to be bold and edit a tiny piece of text out. Everything looks okay and will be passing! Arconning (talk) 02:10, 19 May 2024 (UTC)[reply]
I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Wonder if this Drake's a certified loverboy too. Arconning (talk·contribs)
was a Chinese-born, just a quick question, is his nationality ambiguous so that Chinese-born British isn't put?
I could not find a source which explicitly calls him British, even though he certainly was... But it turns out one of the sources I already use calls him English, so, yes much better put. - G
throughout occupation, throughout the occupation. Grammatically correct originally but that's just my suggestion^^ It's alright if not followed.
Flows better with a the, I think you're right. - G
by which point Drake, change by to at.
Good point. - G
a position as the Professor of Chinese Studies, remove the.
Fixed. - G
and foundation of what would become the University Museum and Art Gallery., add the before foundation.
while Dora and the child remained in England., no problems with the sentence, just think it's funny to put their son as "the child". True enough so no issues with it.
Possibly say the reason why the major anti-British political campaign happened, most likely because of the Tientsin incident.
Both article need end-of-sentence cites for the fact of him discovering the city. The source confirms the claim ("He discovered the Shang deposits at Daxinzhuang"). The source is a doctoral dissertation, but it seems to have a decent number of citations according to Scholar, so I think it's fine to use. Earwig's clear for both articles and no other issues I can see, so gtg once the end-of-sentence cites are added. AryKun (talk) 13:28, 14 May 2024 (UTC)
